Forgotten

A funny little feeling i felt today and wanted to try and put it in writing

It would seem i have been forgotten

These halls no longer call my name

They have fallen silent since i left

And they refuse to speak upon my return

I call out in to the nothingness

 No reply

This is what it feels like to be invisible

This is what it feels like to be ignored

I peruse every corner and walk down the halls

I dance near the windows and skip down the stairs

This isn't so bad

What's in a name anyway?

Author's Note

i have spelling issues.........

Reviews

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"I peruse every corner and walk down the halls
I dance near the windows and skip down the stairs
This isn't so bad
What's in a name anyway?'
...such a great expression through poetry
of that 'forgotten' emotion...excellent poetry!!!:-)

[Frantzuu]

This is a well put together piece of writing, you already know you have spelling issues so i'm not ganna comment on that. The point is this poem is well done, the message is clear. so Great job :D