Question unanswered

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A Poem by chillz

TODAY

Can you feel the pain
written in these words?
Can you see the little 
happiness I have left in my soul? 
TODAY
Why do I always 
end up all alone,
even when I am 
surrounded by an entire world? 
TODAY
If there is so 
much love in the world 
why do I feel 
so cold and misunderstood?
TODAY
 They say "A better tomorrow" 
well that never came 
now I am sitting here wondering
who is to blame?

© 2010 chillz


Author's Note

chillz
just wrote this hope you enjoy :)

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The girl who lives in today but won't let tomorrow come. Sweet and thought provoking!

Posted 13 Years Ago


very much alone. I remember someone once asking how someone could be lonely when they weren't alone. Well this poem answers that. Nicely written

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this poem. I could feel the depression and detachment from being misunderstood in your words.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on October 9, 2010
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chillz
chillz

Trinidad and Tobago



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