"The Drunken Revelation"

I am so drunk
You seem so near
I feel  your presence
I feel you are here

I see my lies ,striping away their pride
I see my truths ,turning into tears
I see my tears,turning into a mirror
I see myself ,all and clear

I see my ego oblivious of all wantings
I see my wantings oblivious of pleasures
I see my pleasures oblivious of my heart
I see my heart oblivious of all measures

I see ,I roam in the alleys of time
Wearing a mirror, a heart and a cloak of wonder
I see I reach the ocean of humility
I see,I melt,I merge, I surrender

I am not drunk
You feel so real
I am drowning in your presence
I am surging now and here!!

Reviews

[kmartell]

wearing a mirror, a heart and a cloak of wonder


I like that line.

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

That's really good! I agree with MOON, quite thought provoking.

[MOON]

Lovely , this is so good thought provoking.

[WILDERNESS]

Sarah, you got talent and a heart. if what you write is fact.........i am so envious........