Shooting Star
A Poem by Chrys Marie
 I fell from the heavens aflame. 
i was a star, not an angel with wings.i burned too brightly only to die out too soon.i wasn't made to fall with grace.i was made to crash and burn.
© 2016 Chrys Marie
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Very deep, I love it. The title and inspiration from a shooting star is very cool. You truly changed the wishful calm meaning of a shooting star, and instead wrote your own heartfelt tragedy within the scenario. Great write!
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Love it! I took an astronomy class and reason why was because when I was 15, 16, I went camping with several acquaintances and fell in love with the stars.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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7 Years Ago
Thank you! The stars are easy to fall in love with.
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7 Years Ago
I totally agree!
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This is so deep and so nice! i loved your thought process on this one!
keep writing :D
Posted 7 Years Ago
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Added on July 2, 2016
Last Updated on July 2, 2016
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Chrys MarieQC, Philippines
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ʙʀᴜɪsᴇ ᴛʜᴇ sᴋʏ ᴡɪᴛʜ ʏᴏᴜʀ ᴏᴡɴ sᴛᴀʀs
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