It's about time

Tiny poem

My day dwindles
whilst my mouth fills with words

I am aching 

to burst 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometimes we need silence and sometimes we need to speak dear Ciara. I liked the strength of the words. We can feel like a bomb needing to release our words and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.

Coyote

[Ciara]

Oh I love that, yes. Like a bomb. Great analogy. Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome dear Ciara.

[Perry]

Clarity, simplicity, and depth, you've put them on display in an economy of expressive lines. Well done, Ciara.

[Ciara]

Very kind comment, Perry. Thank you!

[Chris Shaw]

I can remember a time like that Ciara. Sure wish it would return, when words flowed in a never ending stream.

Chris

[Ciara]

My childhood years were like that. Thank you Chris!

[An owl on the moon]

This has been a bit of my heart and soul this year... that powerful longing... but time moving forward so quickly. Deeply profound.

[Ciara]

Thank you very much, Owl

[Kelly Scheppers]

I know the feeling, Ciara. Sometimes, I just can't seem to type fast enough!

[Ciara]

My brain is faster than my fingers too. 🙂

[willweb]

Hey, I like that word, "dwindles". I might have to use that sometime.
Ok, I know I speak for a few others so let me say, when you burst, we smile. : )
Come to think of it..."burst" is a pretty cool word too!.

[Ciara]

Dwindle seemed like a fitting word. I'm glad you liked it. Thank you! :)

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

Poetic seed bursts are great, so write away like this fab poem! Kudos!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

[Ciara]

Thank you very much

[divya]

Wonderful imagery!
Its a good thing to be aching to burst.
Always so much better than an empty void!
I love this poem and where it takes me.

[Ciara]

Thanks very much Divya 🙂

[JD Major]

Ciara, Thank you so much, your exquisite burst has quenched my thirst :)

[Ciara]

You are welcome. :) and also thank you