The Unrequited Song

The Unrequited Song

A Poem by h cingisiz
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A less melancholic unrequited love poem of memories and daydreams of a past love.

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A love long gone

Whispers from the past

“Sing the unrequited song

A Faint remember me”

Glances my heart

Captures every breath


Dances in my soul

To melodies of love

Moments of long ago

Spinning in my mind

Eyes softly close

Imaginings run wide



Daydreams requite

Sensibility decrees

“Sing the song once again

Dance in its reprieve”

Hazy in delight

Undeniably true


The moment passes

Love fades away

The ballad’s final verse

Drifts in the breeze

Fragments of my love

Silently free



© 2012 h cingisiz


Author's Note

h cingisiz
does it flow, is it too short? is it overly "wordy", does it portray the memory and daydreaming of unrequited love well?

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Good flowing write , love the sentiments.

Posted 8 Years Ago


It's very nice, and so I think, just the right length. My vote is that you accomplished your goal.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on December 24, 2012
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Tags: unrequited, love, memories, delight, dreams, true

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h cingisiz
h cingisiz

Turkey



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A British ex-pat mother living in SE Turkey with my family, working from home mainly as a graphic and website designer, but I love all things creative including writing but have only recently begun my.. more..

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