The Unrequited Song

A less melancholic unrequited love poem of memories and daydreams of a past love.

A love long gone

Whispers from the past

“Sing the unrequited song

A Faint remember me”

Glances my heart

Captures every breath

Dances in my soul

To melodies of love

Moments of long ago

Spinning in my mind

Eyes softly close

Imaginings run wide

Daydreams requite

Sensibility decrees

“Sing the song once again

Dance in its reprieve”

Hazy in delight

Undeniably true

The moment passes

Love fades away

The ballad’s final verse

Drifts in the breeze

Fragments of my love

Silently free

Author's Note

does it flow, is it too short? is it overly "wordy", does it portray the memory and daydreaming of unrequited love well?

Reviews

[MOON]

Good flowing write , love the sentiments.

[Samuel Dickens]

It's very nice, and so I think, just the right length. My vote is that you accomplished your goal.