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Poems

By Mindy Cipriano

      

      Love is love and love is here,

Here when you need your boyfriend/girlfriend to care fore you,

Care for you on special holidays,

Special holidays like Valentines Day and so on…..

 

      On special days when you love and care for one another,

When you care about some one you want to really do something special,

Something special like get married and spend the whole entire life with them,

When you do that you start to get into a conversation and stuff,

A conversation and stuff but you only have to talk to the person,

The person that you like and give stuff to them you’re self,

 

      When you give them the stuff that you made for them you’re self they will appreciate,

Appreciate you the way you are not the way you try to act, they probably won’t like you,

Won’t like you if you try to act like somebody that your really not ,

If you act like somebody else they might even tell you to go find somebody else ,

Somebody else or they might even tell you to prove to them that you like them that much.

Reviews

[Voice11]

I really like how you started each line with the ending of the last. Very different!

[Padma]

A poem with a different style. love and a few of its steps explained here. I liked reading it.

[visions of doom]

i took a long time to adjust to the colour of the writing but the message was beautiful , be who you were born to be my friend and all else will fall into place ,

[Kiara]

I love this:)especially the first line. . .
the message is great! . . . .try to title it. then it will intrigue more people to read it, other than that there are no problems with this.
love your writing -arabella

[Honeypot]

Hey! This is the second time this week that I've seen this technique in a poem. I'm not sure if there is a name for it or not? I like it though. It makes me want to do one of these myself. For some reason it just looks fun to me. Great job!

[Bud]

The safest bet, and without doubt the best bet, is to be yourself. I like this. And I like the message it carries.