girls

girls

A Poem by garrett

girls are nice

girls are sweet

girls are supportive

© 2008 garrett


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garrett
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I like how observative you are in your writing.

Posted 16 Years Ago


very cute. since you are related to Emily I will accept your invite...and I am sure you will enjoy this site. peace and welcome to writers cafe....

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a very good observation piece. You did a really great job with it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


good


Posted 16 Years Ago


I do like this one, and I think it's super cool to use Mom's picture. Why not try to make your poems six lines, see what they look like. Very good. Rain..

Posted 16 Years Ago


Hey garrett, this is also short and sweet, you should have a go at a six word only poem, the only downside i see you this poem is it feels slightly incomplete to me. I feel there should be more.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on March 29, 2008

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