i fall,i rise

inspirational

over time in my life

  i been trippin over sticks and stones,

i've always got back up with a smile on my face

always pretending that nothing went wrong,

now,as im getting older

 the stones just seem to be getting bigger,

i fall,i rise

because i refuse to be a quitter,

i often lose hope

 almost feel like giving up,

but again ,i fall,i rise

because i have made myself tough,

no sticks ,no stones

 no words can bring me down,

i fall,i rise

and keep standing tall on the ground,

written by:CRYSTAL L KLOSSKI        date:1/14/2015

Author's Note

just to write.....

Reviews

[TheSecretWriter]

Hello again,
I am speechless. You use simple phrases, repitition and easy language but your message is so meaningful, so impressive.
This could easily be turned into a song or something, it has this quality.
Keep writing like this, it's very good!
LG, The Secret Writer

[crystal klosski]

thank u im glad you liked it...:)