Feels Like The End

Your anger

Breaks over me

Like a dam bursting

Tonne upon tonne

Of water

Of fury

 

My eye is swollen

My jaw bruised

My trust broken

 

I sit

Painfully

Against the wall

In the corner

Holding my side

You stand above me

 

 

Hard Eyes

Clenched Jaw

Turned Back

 

Harsh Words

Bloody Fist

Warning Look

 

Your Hand

At

My Throat

Feels Like The End

 

 

Reviews

[Beatrice Mars]

Wow, i really like this (as usual!), but the words are just so ...... (arghh i hate writing reviews) make you want to put you head in hands for a while before going and reading something more happy. (what i think i'm trying to say is that you really got the emotion across).....