The More, The Less

The more

                I display,

The less               

                I show.

 

                The more

I delay,

                The less

I grow.

 

The more

                I stay,

The less

                I go.

 

               

 

The more

I say

                The less

I know.

Reviews

[Beatrice Mars]

Can't get over how much I love this. xx

[EMP]

ooooft. i love this!
the rhyme is sooo good. i love the simplicity of this, the layout, the rhythm, everythingggggggg :D

[Beatrice Mars]

o.O

That is just rather awesome. Great visual structure, brilliant rhyming and (i'm running out of positive adjectives..) amazing content. It sounds confused and yet completely ...lucid? When you read it you feel like you are having a moment of complete clarity and yet it's so simple...love