romeo and juliet

don't make me wish i had listened to my father

oh the tragic love of us

the romeo and juliet of our time

my father does not like you

neither yours me

shall we escape

somewhere they'll never break us apart

shall we run away together

shall we talk it through

with our parents together

shall we give them one chance

before we end tragically just like romeo and juliet

before we kill ourselves inside.

Reviews

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Honestly, I can't say I can relate to your writing, but what I can say is that if your poem is that good, than I can only imagine what your love is like. Never give up, if its really worth it, talk about it with your parents.