Revealing

Revealing

A Poem by Ivory


Love is my muse.
Without it
I live in solitude
But once received,
I am surrounded
By its magic
Love Caters to my imagination
Blissful vivid pictures of happiness
Flashing before me
How desperate I am to hold on
For if love is lost, I fear so is my soul.

© 2014 Ivory


Author's Note

Ivory
There is another side to me that I sometimes reveal through my poetry. Don't we all ?

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Muse is soul. Love is souls connection prime. Magic is metaphysical. Imagination is potential. Your a star child of course you need light :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ivory

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your lovely interpretation..
This speaks with an aire of genuine passion; it is interesting to see what acts as the muse for different writers. For me, it is nothing more than a challenge to progress, evolve, and improve. It is an engaging hobby for me; yet others have so many different ways of approaching their writing. Thanks for reading my work; this was simple, but it spoke true.
Just a couple small revisions I would recommend.
I recommend having caters be in lowercase, because it stands out in an odd way as is. Then you should have a comma after fear. Generally punctuation is not set in stone with poetry, but when setting apart 'I fear' and following it with a so, you should have another comma.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ivory

9 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing my work and for your suggestions : )
its nice to have something (like poetry) that is our own...and how we can express ourselves when in the moment.....great write.....

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ivory

9 Years Ago

I must agree, my poetry is my outlet. Thank you for taking the time to review my work : )
King Author

9 Years Ago

any time, i really don't read other peoples work (don't want to mimic other people's style), and i h.. read more

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Ivory

(Formerly: NYC), Currently: Bethlehem, PA



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