Love Crimes

Love Crimes

A Poem by Ivory
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Repost piece i had up before cafe bugged out. Just showing my range... : )

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Your anger attacks me.
With eyes like daggers,
piercing my flesh.
Voice so chilling,
scares me to death.
Disregard my tears,
your emotions stay strong.
Never to admit,
your treatment of me is wrong.
Tell me you love me everyday.
Those are just words.
Your actions push me away.
Thought I earned your trust.
Why do you question my loyalty?
Never have I hurt you.
Your past, has betrayed me.
Learned to forgive you.
It’s your turn now,

Believe in me.
I am not your enemy,
love me completely.
Should be a crime to love so deeply;
if so,
Let us both be guilty...

 

© 2008 Ivory


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This was well written!
I can really relate to whats going on here.
Its so good that I feel like my girl and I are
The ones this poem is about and I've never cheated
on her or betrayed her...lol. Good Job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

uncompromisingly genuine and powerful!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Ivory
Ivory

(Formerly: NYC), Currently: Bethlehem, PA



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