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Oh! Creature cruel and cold,

What doth maketh thee so bold?

Art all thy secrets covered with lies?

All hidden by some elaborate disguise.

 

I wish to capture thy heart by knowing,

Thy secrets, that thou art not showing.

I shall remain and keep thy company,

So that I may unravel this grand mystery.

 

Alas now you leave, depart to go,

I now realise that I yet may never know,

But as I follow you one thing I know is true,

With every thought and with all my heart,

           I love you.

Author's Note

Indeed comment away people

Reviews

[cmaynard]

Indeed I agree, many thanks, I shall make the change!

[Poeticpiers]

Nicely done your use of archaic form is well done but Doth make should read maketh to keep the tenses correct ivor