Trap

Trap

A Poem by Jacqueline Chloe
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trap of love

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You set me in your trap,
was that your goal?
To receive some medal,
or even some gold?

Was this just a game,
to mess with my heart,
or did you know how it was going to end,
even from the start?

You told me you loved me,
but who ever knew,
The guy I fell in love with,
was too good to be true.


© 2010 Jacqueline Chloe


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Jacqueline Chloe
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um so yeah, i kinda loved this? haha chloe, you're such a good writer :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Heh, isn't it awful when something like that happens?
People who seem to perfect are sometimes exactly that, too perfect, ne?
Well, regardless. I liked the simplicity of the piece, simple words, simple rhythm, but it says something in it.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on September 16, 2010
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Jacqueline Chloe
Jacqueline Chloe

Atlanta, GA



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