Life's Game

A song im working on. It's about life's stress and how to bare with the weight of it all on a person.

All of the struggles that a kept for later in life

somehow crash on my shoulders in one night

They say dont stress over the little things

But the little things can add up 

By the end it cost too much to see what else life brings

Wether its social, or its mental

Solutions seem illogical

To keep my thoughts from exploding

I write 'em down to keep systematical

My future is greater than my present

If I cant keep it together now

Imagine what I cant help but not prevent

 

Reviews

[Joseph M. Shea]

I find it very subjective, Not really pointing at one thing, but every thing. Time is a great teacher, she waits and watches, with out judgement, just wonder. Good luck with the writing. Word are like seeds, spred them around and something will take root. Take care, Joe

[LegitFlyingTaco]

Hm. This really pokes at your brain. I can some-what relate to this. Struggling to hold on to now because you know that maybe someday the future will have better things in store for you. But it's hard because holding on for so long has made you want to give up. This is a very nice write. You do have a few things misspelled though but well done. (: