Shush

A ten word story. But it says far more than that.

She shivered and shook but my arms held her tight.

Reviews

[A Shell]

i know you kinda think this one is dumb and cliche... so sue me for thinking it's sweet! most things about love or feelings seem to automatically be deemed cliche. why is that? i suppose it's hard to express originally ... words fail ... i dunno it's still nice to hear an attempt though. XOXO

[Jesse F Hayes]

Beautiful imagery. Few words but very potent indeed.

[James K. Blaylock]

Wow! This one is awesome.

[Clarisse Nanoit]

Wow. The only word (besides "fantastic", "intriguing", and "wonderful") that I can think of to describe this poem is "ambiguous". So short, and yet, it'll have me thinking for some time. Great work.
KH

[Sarah S.]

it might be cliche, but it is very pretty.

[the ghost of pauls]

A squeeze without pressure, very nice. And the tags make a cute poem, too.