Labyrinth

...I gots stucked in my mind again... o.O

 

The first time I saw,

The second time I felt,

The third time I spoke,

But no words came out.

 

Once I felt sorrow,

Once I felt guilt,

Once I felt abject

But my face seemed to melt.

 

At one point I smiled,

But my teeth disobeyed,

They jumped in my throat

And shouted bad names.

 

I thought about leaving,

I thought I could leave,

But inside the maze,

I could not find the cheese.

 

There is no more endings,

The beginning is gone,

In no way I have lost,

In no way I’ve won.

 

One day I may die here,

One day I may fall,

But wherever I am,

It is here where I shall.

Reviews

[Legion]

Love this.

"I thought about leaving,
I thought I could leave,
But inside the maze,
I could not find the cheese"

Sounds like a good description of life.

[Angela S.]

wonderful poem! it does make me wonder, what was it like to be the minotaur.... Nice rhym scheme the only thing that seemed a little off was the last line "It is here where i shall" But that was all! Great piece