Move Left Move Right

like the words made to fit on a page

Deliberate and slow
a contingency to know.
How can I see the
yellowing creases
of curved timespace  
folding in on itself?

Like the words,
made to fit on
a flat page.

I am pushed through
a corner too tight.
The pressing of walls,
move left, move right.

What comes out
on the other side
is a representation
not right,
because I perceive
myself not by my
own sight.  

Reviews

[diaphanous]

Thought-provoking and beautifully written. I love the simplicity in your imagery.

[CosminDZS]

I like how you're up this late at night, thanks for the comment.

[diaphanous]

Haha it's not that late for me, it's only 11

[CosminDZS]

Time-zones, you know. Although, 11 can be late for someone, it's all relative, time and stuff.

[CoraZanini]

"How can I see the
yellowing creases
of curved timespace
folding in on itself?"

this picture is amazing.:)

[Bri 810]

I really like the way this reads.

[anna]

This is very well written and expresses what 'Self' truly is. Good write.

[Scott Metro]

because I perceive
myself not by my
own sight.

Easy enough to fix...lol
I don't allow others to define me...so what I see is me.
P.S...I don't play well with others...
Enjoyed your dimensional journey.

[CosminDZS]

I like to play on the Self, most people don't recognize that they perceive themselves through the eyes of other.

Stay smart, Scott.

[Scott Metro]

You too..star gazer...thinker...consumer of knowledge.
:)

[Sami Khalil]

We move left then right to get different perceptions on words and life...Bravo..............

[CosminDZS]

Thank you Sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................