Eight moments later, eight moments earlier... If those moments could just be redrawn, retracted, relived... But life can never be and so we live on and share our pain like this, piercing heartfelt write of yours. And try to breathe. And try to feel them still there. This was chilling Lee. I'm so sorry for Courtney...
Oh gods this seems almost impossible to believe. How can this pain be real? Im so sorry
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
thank you, Tate pain is real,and thank god we don't all get numb to it, pain might be the only re-ba.. read morethank you, Tate pain is real,and thank god we don't all get numb to it, pain might be the only re-bar holding humanity together.
Everytime you've reposted I come back for another read. One of my favorite poems of yours. Every word is as a sincere and well placed as a sunset. Again, one of my favorites.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Next level, Courtney was next level, I look and think, think and look, Yes this holds the moment the.. read moreNext level, Courtney was next level, I look and think, think and look, Yes this holds the moment the months and even now with the cushion of time I can emotionally tumble into the walls rising withe her sent....
I have goose bumps and left with no words to describe how affecting this truly was...
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
No words , life leaves , and we breathe, and again, one foot then two,I don't think I am far enough .. read moreNo words , life leaves , and we breathe, and again, one foot then two,I don't think I am far enough away for perspective, just glad I have some ..purchase in my life today.
A very skillfully and creative poem. Well done. The story within the poem is without tragic. The loss of a loved one leaves a big hole in us that probably won't ever be filled. Remembering them keeps them alive in our hearts, sharing them with others who otherwise wouldn'tk now them. I felt the pain of the loss of Courtney and the joy of Courtney in this poem.
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Creative her conduit to be creative was open, Mine with a horse is open,and now at the cafe, I have .. read moreCreative her conduit to be creative was open, Mine with a horse is open,and now at the cafe, I have opened given ,squeezed my emotional sponge, sprinkled some insight around, But mostly pieced together some missing puzzle pieces within me .
Eight moments later, eight moments earlier... If those moments could just be redrawn, retracted, relived... But life can never be and so we live on and share our pain like this, piercing heartfelt write of yours. And try to breathe. And try to feel them still there. This was chilling Lee. I'm so sorry for Courtney...
Came back for another visit, Lee. I see you did some remodeling, made this an even more powerful More touching, version. Extraordinary finish.
Diego
Posted 11 Years Ago
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11 Years Ago
Ya I check on it,when I hear thunder, or a 25 or 26 year old dies in the news, Her words are still s.. read moreYa I check on it,when I hear thunder, or a 25 or 26 year old dies in the news, Her words are still strong,my frustration, still in my life but more of a accepting attitude towards the "Event",Courtney truly is everywhere with me now, I don't know what that means
Immortalize her not only in your heart, but in your words. Be well,
Lee
10 Years Ago
Lee. I've been passing through catching up on the poems of my old friends. One of the most beautiful.. read moreLee. I've been passing through catching up on the poems of my old friends. One of the most beautiful, haunting and touching writes that I remember, and there have been so many. She was beautiful Lee.
10 Years Ago
thank you Diego, Wish my life would carve out a hollow of time to write in, but it has not. Good of .. read morethank you Diego, Wish my life would carve out a hollow of time to write in, but it has not. Good of you to stop ,You allowing me "to extend the light " was very helpful, thank you again. And yes I like this Poem of mine too.
Good morning,Thank you for stopping by. I like to write,I like to layer a story into a poem,I want to crack through to the reader,add emotion to life, theirs and mine. more..