Words knot Worlds

Words knot Worlds

A Poem by lee von cleef

Chapter one had to have a chapter two, and three.


Mean spirited  perfume
Singed eyes and the steeds splendid stature
Their presence hidden by
The knight of Oblivion
Purer then glass
He provided a mystical camouflage
a sky serene
Yes death
Tip toed for the two,
Unseen merciful madness

Clouded eyes fought perfume
Majestic splendid the horse bunched
bowing to a sublime presence
Oblivion exposed
a purer realm awaited him
the glass cut
mortal and horse fell from the sky serene
madness or death
 two prayed for merciful gods.

Pungent perfume  prayer
Stately splendid presence a horse
and rider escaping  the knight of Oblivion
Purer thoughts  exist
Gods raised their glass
toasting their sky serene
Uncloaking the veil of death
two  realms balanced
one merciful, one bedlam coiled death

© 2012 lee von cleef

Author's Note

lee von cleef
The conclusion to Tolvin.

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Wonderful!!..............I like the second version the best (did you mean vail, or veil?...could be either?) So very different than what I came up for the contest. I would certainly enter all 3 versions!

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Posted 9 Years Ago

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9 Years Ago

Don't know the rules can you enter more then one ?

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Added on August 13, 2012
Last Updated on October 25, 2012
Tags: perfume, spirits, mystical, madness, love, horse, snake, death


lee von cleef
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Good morning,Thank you for stopping by. I like to write,I like to layer a story into a poem,I want to crack through to the reader,add emotion to life, theirs and mine. more..