Food  (AKA Anticipation)

Food (AKA Anticipation)

A Poem by lee von cleef
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Sounds to Salivate

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 I just really like the sound of "Constantina"
Goes good with" Puerto Rican Pachuco "
Fence climbers
Blue corn flat sour cream chicken enchilada,
With two eggs sunny side up,
Perky......
Pitcher full of Ice
8 limes shades of green yellow scurvy fighters
Agave, clear, Coinertau and his half brother Gran Marnier
Let the pitcher sweat
Conversation
Sea side salty dream
Tan line distraction
Pour it up, eat it up
Logic will fall short of truth
Sometimes......


© 2013 lee von cleef


Author's Note

lee von cleef
A dinner date....I got the bill.....

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A feast of contrasting sounds, a cornucopia of cold sharp and broad creamy vowels, with a tactile freshness that is the aural equivalent of a work by the Dutch master Willem Kalf. Little wonder that logic falls short when a poem like this whets the reader's appetite.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

Man wow,If only we cold all capture the complex complection of youth. quaff that cowlick soooo cold .. read more



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what a pic...love your words maybe the bill was worth the tan line distraction...all though Barbie has an even tan...perfect you know*)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

found that pic on this my daughters funny spot.
Awesome poem, excellently penned, and that picture made me crack up. Especially those troll dolls, just watching Barbie being roasted........
Creative!:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

Catten Catten did not even see your last monicker, Bella just held me in place,you better blink or t.. read more
SwagMaster

11 Years Ago

Haha, I was actually just thinking about changing that picture......I really should use a picture th.. read more
LOL i love that picture. Like the write as well.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

stole it from this computer of! my daughter, phuni
Like a drunken conversation on the beach.... Can't get over the picture...Totally fun read:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I'm a margareta man myself with plenty of salt thank you very much. Nevertheless, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem of yours which has made me hungry for more...

All Good Things, Neville

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like a very mouth watering dinner. I am sure it was worth the price you payed.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Yum made me hungry :) This is fun and cleaver and very full of imagery. Nicely written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Loving the word play and thinking I might be heading to ''Patricia's'' right now. (Homemade blue corn chicken enchilades in mole sauce).... great little piece that kicked my salivary glands into high gear... Thanks Lee. Oh, and that picture just about killed me...

DPaz

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Food, glorious food .. la la lala laaaaaa! Yes, please. Haven't had the pleasure of everything you list but, come what may, just watch me drool .. ever the lady! The music of a menu can be a real concert o.. and you've already made my feet move tip toe tip!

'Goes good with" Puerto Rican Pachuco " Fence climbers Blue corn flat sour cream chicken enchilada, (?) With two eggs sunny side up.' Grief, mouth watering, pass the Grand Marnier!

I have a dress, shoes, clean nails and a hair brush .. am on my way. Wonderful! Sante!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sea side salty dream
Tan line distraction

And the pic!


LUV IT!

Posted 11 Years Ago



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