NO

NO

A Poem by lee von cleef
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I have taught my daughters to say
No.
Kind of Zen like,
From the center,
Like a fist in the belly ,
The solar -plexus,
Chakra,
(that word sounds kool)
Not mean or sharp
like a punch to the kidney
Or stick to the shin,
But undeniably clear
Yeshua
(this word sounds true)
Like the next one
Is on your chin.
Now do I pop your ear?
Cut it out.

© 2013 lee von cleef


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lee von cleef
Sound has weight,sound will move mountains,heal,and take away.

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Hit the road Jack, Adios, get the bejeebies out of here, and NO, NO, NO!!! A girl of any age needs to able to say no in a clear and concise way with NO doubt that she means it...not while twirling her hair, winking, flirting, just a unmistakable NO!
I like your references and I agree that Chakra is a cool word! And Yeshua is Jesus, Lord.....yes said with a real yes to a NO!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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yup amen to that...couldn't agree more. No needs to mean no..need I say more?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A most excellent gift to the daughter. How to say NO. A thoughtful, well written piece Lee. And had to smile the way to finished this

Diego

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

no
know
know to say no
maybe doesn't count not even relatively the same
know no and no knows*)
great daughter words from a great teacher
thank you for sharing no I know -chakra-it sounds warm no cool oh I don't know

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hit the road Jack, Adios, get the bejeebies out of here, and NO, NO, NO!!! A girl of any age needs to able to say no in a clear and concise way with NO doubt that she means it...not while twirling her hair, winking, flirting, just a unmistakable NO!
I like your references and I agree that Chakra is a cool word! And Yeshua is Jesus, Lord.....yes said with a real yes to a NO!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this. A girl really does need to learn how to say no and a guy needs to learn how to hear no. Beautifully written.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

I am going to add a line,to it just to give it some confusion,No does sound alot like maybe.
Carolann Dowsett

11 Years Ago

Now that's a bit scary, if no sounds like maybe then what word really means no?
lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

Now hows that? confuse you?,I doubt it, But it will others.
I see the lines burst with pride! Great feeling :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lee von cleef

11 Years Ago

yes a girl needs to know how to say ..NO.

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