Bittersweet Kisses

Bittersweet Kisses

A Poem by Craig

The taste of your lips sting me,

 

where it once invigorated me.

 

That sweetness,

 

I thought to be love,

 

has turned sour,

 

spoiling the hint of love.

 

Your kisses have turned cold,

 

bitter,

 

repulsing my heart,

 

poisoning me to the core.

 

Is this what they mean by

 

"bittersweet"?

 

I do not know...

 

But I know there lies more

 

bitter within you,

 

than there is the sweet.

© 2016 Craig


Author's Note

Craig
Based on a love that went bad...

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This is nicely done and flows so well. It's something that many of us can relate to well. You captured that ending of a relationship that once was so good, as it dies.

P.S.Check the typo in last sentence. Should be "than" I think.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Craig

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the compliment. And thanks for catching that. For some reason, I have a habit of doing.. read more
Shimmerbliss/CAF

8 Years Ago

It happens to me to. All that tap, tap, tapping (as well as the darned autocorrect sometimes!). You'.. read more

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Craig
Craig

Dallas, TX



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Hello... My name is Craig. I love to write stories and poetry and as of this writing (April 2016), I am hoping to achieve my long time dream of becoming a published author. I have completed my fir.. more..

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