We are Humans

A cynical view on the human race.

We are humans.

We wake up to the bright sky and sleep to the darkness that consumes us.

We are a breed, a growing breed.

We are all individuals yet one.

We try to detach ourselves from the human race, but we can't.

After all; we are humans.

Reviews

[Nisreen]

Often one loses touch
and forgets
we all share the same sky
and are closer to one another than we think

simply beautiful
and filled with peace

[DaVoid]

Simple. Too simple?
Glad to be human. Together with you in this human race.

[Tessa]

could you help me extend this poem?
any tips?

[DaVoid]

Dare to play with a idea and go in depth of what can not be said.

You can split a sentence in two and go further in depth with each idea.
What would you tell me when I am not convinced by your arguments? What examples can you present?

You can use sensory based description to enrich the experience you present.

After all, when everything is said and done, no words can be added, nothing is won.
We are humans in the way we breath , the way we sleep and than need to pee..

You see?

[CiNtsaLis]

*chuckles* (covers mouth) *pinches skin* Am I human? *nodding head* Yep, that sounds about right. That's me too, *chuckles* Full ratings- dear. (: Looved it