One.

One.

A Poem by crashandburnplz
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Note is at the end.

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One moment is all it takes.

Two seconds.

One call.

Three words.

A friendship is shattered.

Amazing memories locked away, or scoffed at when remembered.

Favourite songs never listened to again.

Plans, never acted out.

 

 

I have another poem similar to this, though it's about a different topic.

About a recent, completely unexpected breakup. I have another, much more drawn out version on this in my head, which I started to write here, but gave up on it. :/

I can't bring myself to write about it. Anyway, hope you like it. :]

© 2009 crashandburnplz


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It's so short, that it's sweet. The raw emotion put into is so clear, it's scary. Great job on describing this event in your life. A word of advice-- things will get better. =)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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its a shame you couldnt bring yourself to write out more i think it would be really good. i'd have liked to read it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on June 8, 2009

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crashandburnplz
crashandburnplz

Steeleville, IL



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Uh.. Not too much to say about me. Call me Crash, because of my username, or Feefer because that's what everyone else calls me. I write, but I've kinda took a break because of school. I'm pree' s.. more..

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