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A Poem by Chasity

I close my
eyes and
see myself
alone.
Those that
I love are
looking at
me from
a distance
I call to them
but they turn
their backs
to me
I need their
help and
I hope they
turn around
especially
You

© 2008 Chasity


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It brings to mind the question of with eyes open, does one still see oneself alone. This work tells a sad tale of loneliness, a combination perhaps of self-exile and abandonment. A sad piece...

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Added on August 6, 2008

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Chasity
Chasity

Mattydale, NY



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There really isn't a whole lot to tell, i enjoy watching movies, listening to pretty much all types of music, reading fantasy stories. I write poems, which aren't really that good, and i've written so.. more..

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