Small

In the air
looking down
everything is so
small
like ants we
are from up
above
scurrying to and
fro
Where we go
is always
the same
but where we
will end up
is the important
question

Reviews

[alesuriko]

Nice poem. Very intuitive and full of expression. The flow and rhythm could use a little work, your breaks make it slightly awkward to read. But it's a good poem with a good message and imagery.

[Adrian K. Smith]

We are all little bits of a larger bit, though we get caught up in how large a bit we play in that bigger bit - going about, doing the same old - same old, hoping that in the end it is all for the best. As much the where, the what, the how, the when... is the why.