Hidden

How i feel at school

Always in the back

Hidden behind loud voices

Unheard, unseen

Living a life of misery

Pushed to the side

Hidden behind the brighter, bolder people

Author's Note

Feel free to give true opinions! :)

Reviews

[Jessica Lima]

Sometimes we think that being invisible is bad. But having the ability to come and go unbothered is a blessing. it could always be worse. People could see you and dislike you, and bully you.

Its fine to want to be seen, but can you protect yourself from the judging eye? can you even pass their inspection?

[Jennifer Cullum]

Being invisible is awesome when i can slip away unnoticed i agree, but its times like when i want to answer in class but im scared that i will be wrong or in a group project when i have ideas i know will be good but i just stay quiet, it's times like that i wish i could speak out and be who i am outside of school, its just something about school its self. I love the way you worded your comment btw thats something im working on... im not used to sharing my poems/songs ive been writing for two years but never really shared online. Thank you for the comment!!

[Jessica Lima]

You know... nobody has it figured out. I was the same way in high school! Actually no, I was hated in hs not invisible. But know what? If you don't mind it doesn't matter. When we say things quietly people won't listen. When we say it again in a normal tone they'll pretend they can't hear you. Sometimes you have to scream and appear Loco to make a point. When you first look into the light it hurts and you want it off. Force people to adjust, force them to look at you and they will eventually like your light. Don't let your light be shut off or muted. Heads up, you can do it.

[Jennifer Cullum]

Thank you, that means a lot. I am definitley trying to get out there more.

[Tony Jordan]

The judging eye - is a really catchy soundbite from Jess Lima in her review. It could be a great (alternative) title for this raw piece Jenni.
Passing inspection is quite a different thing altogether though.
Welcome!