Drawing New

Could we just slide
Along a ray of sunshine
Above a concrete skyline
And drift amongst a sunset
In the breeze
Could we entwine our fingers
Like knotted trees
And imagine a different world
Free?
Could we paint fields
In childrens dreams
Full of flowers
And colors unseen
Can we soothe the pain
Of wounded soldiers
Carry the weight they've placed
Upon their shoulders
Can we save ourselves
From ugly futures
And open our hearts and minds
To a new exsistence
Can we leave the old world behind

Reviews

[Distant horizons]

it's easy if you try, imagine all the people..... Sorry, that song is stuck in my head now :-)
Beautiful, positive write.

[creativequill]

I was having a good day :) haha thank you for the positive review, and its a good song so why not??

[Distant horizons]

:-)