Universal

Universal

A Poem by cretinlung

I’m so sick of discussing this

Our individual planets being on the same list

Battle of the ancients

Incidence of the main list

Speaking alien tongues with a strange lisp

 

It’s a crazy f*****g town our universe resides in.

 

You know, I’ve had enough of these battles

Inner planets vs outer, we’re all from the same kin.

When we just don’t get along it’s like we’re staying away from it again.

Yet we both feel like nothing’s ever going to happen, forget being friends.

Regardless of orbital situation, one of us is always next to the other.

 

It’s a crazy f*****g planet our universe resides in.

 

And yet with all the towers to our moon.

And still with all the women over which I do swoon.

And now since all the apples have fallen to their doom.

And see?  The sea?  It quakes until she’s through.

Until.

She’s through.

With me.

 

It’s a crazy f*****g galaxy our universe resides in.

 

And through the channels of cosmic spice

One sees through the chaos, sometimes it’s superbly nice

to just lie down, back straight against the ground, gaze above at the ice.

Our call drives us forward, ever-freezing forward, counting thrice.

The moon is full tonight. 

I sense a strange goodnight.

I see where totality takes me.

Forward.  Forward.  Forward. 

Through God’s strife.

 

It’s a crazy f*****g universe.

© 2010 cretinlung


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Why yes. Yes it is. This would be interesting put to music. I like the mad-house rush feel to it in its message. Kudos.

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Added on January 8, 2010
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What's to really say? I'm an Air Force brat, meaning I've forgotten more continents than most people have been on. I've traveled to and through most of this country. I love to write (obviously). A.. more..

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