3 Unfinished Poems

These are the ones I didn't finish; feel free to use them to make your own if you want (I personally don't mind)

3 Unfinished Poems

1
my mind is broke
ideas all in smoke
drowning on land
with my head in the sand

2
i'm sober but drunk
depressing attitude
i can't tell
what's fake or true

3
isn't it just strange
that the more things change
the more things stay the same
a fact of life - it's the game

Reviews

[racheljaneface]

1) My mind is broken today.
My ideas consumed by smoke.
Drowning above the water,
suffocating on sand.
Can't seem to see what the world has to offer today,
or what my point is in it all.
I catch myself falling but just stay there, not landing on the ground,
not picking myself up.
I choke on my tears,
sitting alone in my room,
My mind is broken today.

added and changed it a bit. It was a good start :) hope i didn't butcher it

[Crimson_Woad]

not at all, i did give the okay to add =)