Talking to my self ....

Talking to my self ....

A Poem by Cristina E. MCcombs
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I wrote this late one night after i had a dream where i was talking to myself.... I asked numerous questions... Wrote down the ones i remembered and this is what came out of it... Is it poetry?

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I think I may be going crazy?
No scratch that... I know im going crazy
None of it feels real anymore
I cant distinguish fact from fiction
Right from wrong
Love from lust
Where do they cross
Can they ever dance together beautifully?
Are they a doomed tragedy
The Romeo and juliet of my life
Yeah maybe
Will my questions ever get answered?
Will I wait forever ?
I know im alive but i feel mostly dead
Does any of this makes sense ?
Yeah I must be going crazy.. You know how i can tell?
...Im in an empty room talking to myself

© 2017 Cristina E. MCcombs


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Yes this is definitely poetry.. And pretty much reflective too! The things you mention, most of us have gone through this or are going through this (I know I am) but I also think that these are unanswered questions.. I can relate to this.. often you feel dead inside but have to pretend to be alive..
This made me think! Good write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Yes this is definitely poetry.. And pretty much reflective too! The things you mention, most of us have gone through this or are going through this (I know I am) but I also think that these are unanswered questions.. I can relate to this.. often you feel dead inside but have to pretend to be alive..
This made me think! Good write :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 2, 2017
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Tags: Love, slam poem, poem, spilled ink

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Cristina E. MCcombs
Cristina E. MCcombs

Elizabeth, NJ



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Cristina E. MCcombs 20 years old From NJ Writing is my escape from reality and how i get through and handle my mental Illness. more..

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