Illusion

An acrostic form that I wanted to share. I have always enjoyed playing with acrostic form poetry, something about the structured freedom gives my dual sensed brain joy.

It's there to see, so faint and so bold, I can only walk in confusion

Lulled by the sense of it's very existence

Lost as quickly as I am found

Unique to all that I am intrinsically bound

Secure in this knew knowing, I walk forward with absolution

Instead I carry with me no longer the burden of resistance

Only the truth will be my guiding sound

Now that my illusion is buried in the ground

Reviews

[David Darabian]

Not sure what acrostic is but the poem was very nice :) In a way the poem sounds old, as if written in biblical times or during the dark ages with the words absolution, ground, existence, guiding sound, etc.
Well done, Rose, I loved it!

[Robin]

well executed acrostic with a message that shines ~