Get Close

Whose fault is it that this won't work?

Get close to me 

so I can push you away

Come closer

so I can hide my demons for a day

I want you

but not if you want me too

So I dare you:

Find a way to make me stay with you

Author's Note

This is my first post so please give me some feedback.
What do you think of the organization?
Do you feel a connection at all?

Reviews

[Rastinha]

I like the structure, the words flow well. It feels like a personal poem, a tiny snapshot into the mind, but I don't feel totally drawn in because of the shortness of it. A second verse could help to connect with it more, but it is cool as it is too. I also like the contrast between the lines, and the way the person seems to want opposites at the same time. Keep it up :)

[Remembering Love]

Thank you Rastinha, I will definitely think about adding to it.

[Coyote Poetry]

A very good short poem. Honest and direct emotions and words. Need is a funny words. Each of us want more or less. Hard to find equal ground. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote