Wind.

A Story by curiousquirrel

A little 58 word story.

Creek..
The large wooden door swung on its hinges, back and forward back and forward.
She stared at her ceiling wide eyed and fearful. She convinced herself it was only wind. Wind forcing the door, wind making tree arms rustle outside.
Lonely, howling wind.
She was not prepared for what came next, all she expected was the wind.

© 2016 curiousquirrel

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J.Michele

I love your suspense, like they say less is more. :) Well done, keep writing!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Valkyrie Warrior

Ooh, nice one Bella!! Left me feeling a little chilled I must say!

Posted 8 Years Ago

Mary Helda

Oh boy!!! what came next...a ghost?? ...an angel??? .you really did leave me in suspense...great job

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on January 10, 2016
Last Updated on January 10, 2016

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curiousquirrel

New Zealand

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You're probably wondering why my username is curiousquirrel well trust me so was I. In case you were curious my name is Isabella. I have been described as cute, bubbly and weird. Little do these.. more..