Winter Buffalo

Steaming breath.

warm fur.

broad shoulders, the sacred buffalo.

 

In the freezing winter of wyoming.

snow up to the belly.

they die looking for vitals among the freezing flats.

 

The herd is being hunted by a pack of wolves.

desperatly looking for safety and hope.

the buffalo wade through the deep snow.

 

Tragedy hangs within the thick fog.

causing a feeling failure.

Reviews

[MichaelaB]

Great topic, i dont know much about buffalo's but this was cool. I think you should work on making the sentences flow together more.