Colors of Love

Colors of Love

A Poem by SamBug

As I stare off into space,
I start to think of that beautiful,
rainbow barrette.
The one you placed so gently in my hair.
The one still sitting on my dresser now.
The many colors. 
The ones just like you and me.

Red reminded me of all those tears
I cried at night when all alone,
When you didn't come home.

Orange,
sitting peacefully on that barrette,
reminds me of when we fought.
When you didn't want to talk about it.
When all I did was sit
and wait...
Too much waiting.

Yellow
reminds me of the morning after
and you were gone,
not in sight.
Gone at the break of dawn.

Green,
my favorite color.
I linger on that color,
so peaceful;
so calm.
I remember when you brought me flowers.
To apologize.
Apologize for everything.

I move on to blue.
That was the color of the flowers,
the ones I still love to this day.
You took them from my hands
and kissed my tears.

Indigo.
The sound of your voice,
telling me, "I love you."
The sweet melody of the harps,
Violins
Springing from the mouth
on your sweet,
unbearable face.

Violet.
I catch myself smiling,
thinking about you.
Thinking about what we have
and share.
It's a powerful thing
to be in love.

And just knowing I will see you,
makes my heart spin with glee.
I would repeat each color again,
starting with red
as long as you're with me!

© 2010 SamBug


Author's Note

SamBug
I wrote this really fast and in like five minutes so don't be too harsh. Reviews would be great! :)

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The poem is very beautiful. I like the set-up and the flow of the poem. A wise person can see the beauty and good things in their life. Total poem was very good. a perfect ending to your poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


hey guess what? i already love this poem because i saw you write and read it before you posted. you know i LOVE YOU SAM LOU

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like the idea of the poem, although I don't see the connection with some of the colors. But I guess it's all about how you see them. Nice write, though.

Posted 13 Years Ago


your really good if you wrote this in five minutes. i find this interesting... where did you get the idea to write about a bret? i really liked this! :) its different and that shines to me. i also like how its long, but it doesnt make the reader bored of it. my favorite stanza is the one about violet.

Posted 13 Years Ago


green and blue are my fav colors those were my fav part of the poem but this is a very noce poem i like it

Posted 13 Years Ago


I thought this was a good poem. I like the colors too. Especially red cause that is one of my favorite colors. It was really cute. Very enjoyable and interesting. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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