Sitting, Waiting, Wishing

Hurt.

Broken.

Lost.

 

I linger on my thoughts.

Can I trust you?

Do you really like me?

Are your words true,

those words I longed to hear?

This happened once,

you know the time.

My heart so hurt

at your one crime.

 

Apologies.

Hope.

False hope.

 

I let you in again.

I handed you my heart

and the key to open it.

You had control

of every move,

every word I said.

 

Plans were made, future embraced.

But now it feels like you are gone.

Like we have traveled back in time.

Reliving the past

when you were gone so fast.

 

I sit here...

broken...

wishing....

wanting....

waiting....

for you.

Author's Note

I don't want to relive the past. I can't do that again. I can't trust him again if this happens. :( Just a thought going through my mind to ease the hurt and worry.

Reviews

[Rawr!!XD]

Lots of pain and emotion. Very strong, the questions helped get the point across. I liked this a lot.
Great write.

[Coyote Poetry]

A lot of pain and hurt in your words. Sometime we need to pay attention to our mind. Old wise saying. One time is a mistake. Two times you are a fool. Three times we are dummies. A strong poem. Asking many questions. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Daisy123]

I like this, the words flow well and I can relate, nice job!

[Tahna]

I love the use of words, nice poem :)

[Norma M Sutton]

Very nice. I like the repeat of the start at the end.

[Ross Saunders]

Very well done. I'd be a little concerned about the title confusing this with the song, but beyond that this was an excellent piece of poetry.

[Kandy]

this is such a lovely poem. i can feel the speaker's every emotion, bad or good. i really like the way u structured your poem. very nice job.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I'm sorry that he did that too you. I understand though because most guys make people wait. I really think that it is stupid when people do that. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Ashley.M.E]

this is really good.. and I honestly know how you feel

[TadKent]

I Love how this plays like a story. I feel like I'm listening to a tape recorder, with you saying those words to me. I Love the one liners. :) Tragic and riveting piece. Love your work.