Healthy critisism

Healthy critisism

A Poem by Eric
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A bit of a rant regarding a cultural romance with gluttony, entitlement and ignorance for an entire world being bent and broken by our obesity.

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We find you America the enslaved to be

Guilty

Your white picket complacency validated by your
Heterosexual Abercrombie sit-coms
With patriotic f*g burning nobility marching through your veins like caffeine jolts of emotionally driven terrorism
your feelings become tyrants, conclusions, evidence and facts of emotionally driven narcissism
The validation of righteous selfness in a war against otherness
You are bloated on fast food ideology;
You have microwave thinking and face book facts
Every hand is raised and straining to be seen
by the auctioneer who’s selling your freedom by degrees of conformity
God is a primordial ooze expressing itself as a man
Who forgetting himself reaches eternally for nothing
And declares he’s holding heaven
In a world of illusion everyone wants to sell you reality
We find your white picket complacency validated by your
Heterosexual Abercrombie sit-coms

We find you guilty

© 2014 Eric


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Thanks Muse! I appreciate the feedback!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Words that sting. Bravo for penning them out! And I couldn't agree more. We America, have become pacified by gluttony. The mooshier the stomach....the mooshier the brain I guess. Indulgence in too much TV...too much shopping, all of it is over-consuming. The rest of the world goes hungry while some of us decide to super size a McDonalds order. No matter how you look at it, it is a disease, it is a sickness, it is an addiction. Our Government and media is fattening up the human livestock right before the slaughter. Most of us will be too fat, dumb and/or too complacent to run.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Seattle, WA



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Interpreter for sign language - mental health therapist I've written a novel but it needs something and I'm not sure what... hoping to get feedback to make it swoosh. more..

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