first kiss

love it takes you back to the day your first kiss .

your hands shake .

heart beats faster.

your breath lost in the air.

your knees weak feeling like you going to fall.

then when your first real kiss comes .

your whole life stop and ever little thing is

blaring .

you cant hear nonething the whole

world stop just for you .

Reviews

[*Kantola*]

I enjoyed reading this :)
Even though I havent had my first kiss... EVER... I ... no, cant say I know what it's like. xD I'll just say I've had a similar experience. Good job with this poem :P
Saw a few spelling errors.
"Your knees week feeling like YOU'RE going to fall"
"Your whole life STOPS and EVERY little thing is"
"You cant hear NOTHING the whole"
"world STOPS just for you"

Great concept, aside from the minor spelling errors. :)