Love

Love

A Poem by slightly terrified

Once you fall in love for the first time it's hard to fall in love again. It's hard to open up again. You feel as if no one will ever treat you as good as the first. Everything will be different, You're scared of change. You just need to have faith that there is going to be someone for you that makes you the happiest person in the world. There is that special person for everyone. You just need to stay patient. Don't give up. I promise you someone will come along and make you forget all of your pain.

© 2016 slightly terrified


Author's Note

slightly terrified
I realize that this doesn't apply to everyone.

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I think we lose courage after losing our first love... The fear of getting our heart broken again is the most overwhelming thought that keeps us away from opening up to someone else again but as you said there is always someone out there who will make us feel special, we just have to go out there and express... There is always hope... Very uplifting write for the broken hearts...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

slightly terrified

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!



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We never know how and when but love just jumps at you when you least realize it.
There should asked be hope and the person that you love will find you one day.

Posted 7 Years Ago


I think we lose courage after losing our first love... The fear of getting our heart broken again is the most overwhelming thought that keeps us away from opening up to someone else again but as you said there is always someone out there who will make us feel special, we just have to go out there and express... There is always hope... Very uplifting write for the broken hearts...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

slightly terrified

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
Nice heartfelt poem. It's something I can relate to. Great job. There is a typo in the third sentence; the word "you" should be after "treat." Otherwise, great work.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

slightly terrified

7 Years Ago

oh heck dude thanks I'll fix that!

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I have been very uninspired lately so I won't be posting as much. That is also why my pieces are decreasing in quality so I'd rather not post a lot of bad ones and just post a good one when the right .. more..

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