If I Shall Die Today

If I Shall Die Today

A Poem by Daisy Fields

if i shall die today

i will have lived a thousand lifetimes of happy bliss

contained within that single passing moment 

of unspoken, unending, beauty.

that moment 

when our eyes first met 

across that ocean of blurred lights and faces 

and i stood there

with my naked soul

heart like a humming bird

suspended in time.

that moment 

when everything fell into place

and simultaneously all fell away

and i stood there

lost in the reality 

of your breathtaking existence. 

was i at all born before that day

that moment, that face
that brought life to theses bones

breath to these lungs

words to this paper

and reason to this old and weary soul.

yes if i shall die today

i will have lived a thousand times more 

then any one who has ever died before

for i have danced in your grace 

long enough to know, to not fear fate.

© 2015 Daisy Fields


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Beautiful. To know love and feel so alive, that it feels like your first breath, then wrap it into words and lay them so beautifully. Superb. Thank you for sharing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I'm breathless. I'm tearing up as I write this. Your gentle and experienced words have drawn some of the most unnoticed and important feelings/memories from the corners of my mind. I relate to every line. I understand where you wrote this from, and I can't thank you enough. Immediately saved it to my library.
Bravo. Keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I liked it could feel the emotions

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 28, 2015
Last Updated on September 28, 2015
Tags: romance, passion, love, heartache, poetry

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Daisy Fields
Daisy Fields

Toronto, Ontario, Canada



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