Falling

I am losing hold of what is real 
And what is just in my head
I am falling deeper into the blackness 
the silence is my only friend
The ache in my chest the only thing I can feel
I am numb so numb
It's cold and lonely up here someone come help me get down
The rain falls and hits my face
Mixing in with my tears 
Just like a dirty window pane I can't see clearly
I lost the sunshine I once knew. It was so bright
It helped me see my way I the darkness
The light has gone 
Where it is I know not
I need that light to return
Before I completely lose 
control

Author's Note

What do you all think of it?

Reviews

[CreativeCookie]

I love it! You have gone deep into the soul, a place where most dare not go. It's really good, I wish I could get that much depth in my writeing. Keep it up, you are amazeing!

[Music For The Wounded Soul]

Thank you so much! ^^