Waiting

One Message.

 

One messgae is all it took.

 

One message is all it took to ruin everything.

 

I thought I could change things.

 

But I couldn't.

 

Two years.

 

Two years of waiting.

 

Two years of waiting for that one chance to change things.

 

I hoped.

 

I dreamed.

 

I waited.

 

But nothing ever happened.

 

One messgae.

 

One message that took two years to send. 

 

Two years of waiting to convince myself to send that one message that could change things.

 

But I couldn't.

 

 

One Message.

 

Two years.

 

All for nothing.

 

 

Reviews

[Graveyardfuck]

God I know that feeling all too well...

[Simon Welsh]

Some people just aren't f*****g worth it.

[Graveyardfuck]

How do you know who is and who isn't?

[Simon Welsh]

People who are worth it stick around.

[Death Girl]

Again I love this. I like how you have repetition in this.

[Kainan Corrales]

Nice repetition and theme. Sounds like there is a lot of emotion tied into this poem.