Love Waits

Love Waits

A Poem by Dana Ferguson

Open but broken,
another love gone.
I cherished them all,
but something was wrong.
This burden I bear,
all alone.
But hope prevails,
future unknown.
Carry me there,
on love's gentle wings.
Maybe one day,
I'll soon be free.

© 2015 Dana Ferguson


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This is the poem of so many. You did a great job!

Posted 2 Years Ago


that sweet, I see some feeling is nice in your poem good keep up be continue, please also read my poem will help you what love is shine

Posted 4 Years Ago


It is important to reach for your stars... but it takes two for a we, and both have to work for it.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dana Ferguson

4 Years Ago

I completely agree with you :)
Such a sweet message.....The title conveys a lovely and pure spirit.....Simplicity makes it more special.....Full of powerful feelings and wonderfully thought out.....I loved it frnd....

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dana Ferguson

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much! I try to speak from the heart :)
I love the positivity of this piece. From the first line to the last, you put hope before regrets of the past and despite being hurt, show a willingness to treat people on their own merits, rather than carry these over into the next relationship. If only we were all as hopeful and forgiving, we would be living in a better world.
Beautifully written, thought provoking piece.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dana Ferguson

4 Years Ago

Thank you, I think it's important not to give up :)
alifeacoustic

4 Years Ago

Very true. Keep looking forward :)
what beagn empty and broken ends with a faint light of hope. sometimes that is all it takes to start the fire again. great writing, i could feel this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Dana Ferguson

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

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Dana Ferguson
Dana Ferguson

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