my most favorite person

my most favorite person

A Story by chris' girlfriend
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ChRiS ToRrEs

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I love Chris Torres. Ive only knew him for almost a year now and i already know hes my soul mate :) No matter what i know we will always be friends.  He is the most warm-hearted person you could ever meet. 

I feel so cruel because ive hurt he so many times.  He doesnt deserve to be treated that way :( I am usually a very nice person but sometimes I take my problems out on the people i love. 

i hate the way i am!!!

© 2008 chris' girlfriend


Author's Note

chris' girlfriend
sorry this isnt a good story.... just me running my mouth

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aww i like it. its sweet

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dana im so sorry for the way i hurt you ily :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a sweet poem dana, and reveals your love in an affection tone,
holding close to the ones in your heart, its well written and the reader
can fully tell you are having fun writing it, which is blissful, expressed and
punctuated nicely, Great Job, sure all who read will feel your happiness.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

yeah. They're right. writing from your feelings is good. If you can't tell people what you think face-to-face then writing is an answer. It has no limits and boundaries.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

dana its an awesome story i love you!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well we all do that sometimes but just make it up to him with your sweet love and then all the pain will go away (: hugs

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

i understand it all really i do
and its good to do that

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sorry but I went back and re-read it you are also making the mistake of
"knew him" it should be 'known him'. I am sory though I can't really stand to see mistakes even though I make them constantly. That's why I love reviews! They tell me my mistakes!!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's good,really it is. Just write from your heart, that's all I do.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"hurt he so" It should be 'hurt him so much'
Every one goes through horrible times and if he is willing to stay with you even after some of the things I have heard then he loves you back as much as you love him. And you could always get a stress ball to help you control your spouts that I have heard about.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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i love chris torres!!!! i have a cat~Shadow, a rat~Quinn and a tarrantulla~Clarissa favorite color~ purple favorite band~ Lamb of god, and The Used favorite animal~ cats and walruses my religion is .. more..

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