Reality or Society

Reality or Society

A Poem by Dani
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I know it is a short poem, but personally I think that it is one of my most powerful. This poem basically outlines how a single opinion can influence society into losing originality.

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A sense of urgency, fatality
Originality evanescing from individuality

A single thought drifted from reality
Countless considerations now driven to insanity

Causeless opinions lacking confidentiality
And what was once unique, beautiful? A victim of social travesty




© 2013 Dani


Author's Note

Dani
There may be a couple instances where I may have misused my vocabulary. What do you think of the message being conveyed? Is it too difficult to grasp hold of the purpose of this poem? Any additional feedback?

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There relatively is no misuse of vocabulary. Wow, I shelved this in my library since it was so great. Adding the bolded words was an a wonderful idea -- It shows the originality that is being degraded and eventually worn out to the point where it is so rare to find. Fantastic. I'd really like to see more.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I loved it. it was truly powerful and mindblowing

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on July 27, 2013
Last Updated on July 27, 2013
Tags: Society, Reality, Pressure, Thoughts, Effect, Transformation, Process, Originality, Travesty, Social

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Dani
Dani

Lost In, NJ, United States Minor Outlying Islands



About
My name is Dani, or formally known as Daniella, and I am of sixteen years. I am anticipating the start of my junior year in high school come this September, and I have a strong passion for writing. I .. more..