Radiant Paradise

A poem from camp. I had to write it in a certain format that you'll probably pick up easily. Enjoy!

My room

My cave of fantasies

Where my wildest dreams

Become real before my eyes.

 

My room

My comforting beach

Bathing me unconditionally

With love, light, and warmth.

 

My room

My refuge in an imperfect world

No one is here to judge me

Just me, alone.

 

My room

My messy chaos

Where things seem to be lost

But totally easy to uncover.

 

My room

My radiant paradise

The light green of my walls

Seem to grow and bloom before my eyes.

 

My cave of fantasies

My comforting beach

My messy chaos

My radiant paradise

My refuge in an imperfect world

Bathing me unconditionally

With love, light, and warmth.

Reviews

[Poeticpiers]

nicely presented piece of poetic prose outlining your safe haven where things remain safe and sane

[Emily Rose]

Awww how sweet! It's so true, too - we all need a safe haven of some kind. I like how you turned the second lines of each stanza into a stanza of their own at the end - clever! Good job.